A splash of colour would have been nice ;) I like her slender legs, though she has a bit of a squat neck to be swanlike. x
I agree with Adam there. Some colours would be great Nicely done!
I like how you chose a slightly difficult angle-and put some nice arm foreshortening in there, to echo the colour calls I would have loved to have seen not a swan, but some crazy irridecence of a peacock!
Haha you and your iridescence fixation Dave ;)